Peer Reviews

It was helpful to get input about my paper from Liz. I was surprised at how much she liked it! I wasn't sure if it was a good topic or if my writing style was affective, so it was nice to be encouraged :) She did mention that the flow was a little choppy, so I am working to change that. I'm adjusting the structure to hopefully make the transitions smoother from paragraph to paragraph. Thanks for reading and giving your input, Liz! I think it is always a helpful exercise to have classmates edit each other's papers.